金太阳2023-2024学年广东高一第一学期期末教学质量检测(24-325A)英语试题

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第二节（满分15分）Suddenty a familiar figure came into my camera lens.Therehe stood,among the snow-coveredtrees.My dad,who had been working far away firom home for so long,was back just in time for mybirthday.In disbelief I pointed towards him,and the camera automatically captured this amazingmoment.My father's eyes sparkled with joy as he spotted my surprise."Happy birthday,dear!"With these words,he extended his amms,box in hand.I opened the beautifilly craftedwooden box beside the birthday cake Inside was a snowflake-shaped board bearing my name and the number 18.A message read,"You have grown into anincredible young adult,full of potential and promise.But you are always my little girl."My tearsbegan to well up.He enveloped me and mum in a big warm hug.Brief as his stay might be,thewarmth ofhis love and the memories we shared would forever remain,like snowflakes that frequentmy dreams,turning every ordinary day into something extraordinary.写作评分标准一、写作第一节(一)参考要点：1.向校国际部提出申请作陪同参观敦煌文化之旅的志愿者：2.个人优势：3.希望获准。(二)评分原则：1.本题总分为10分按五个档次进行评分。2。评分时，应主要从内容、词汇、语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：(1)对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3。评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合确定或调整档次，最后给分。4.评分时还应注意：(1)词数少于60的，的情扣分。(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、关拼写及词汇用法均可接受。(3)书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。(三)各档次的给分范围和要求第五档(9-10分)一覆盖了所有内容要点，表述清楚、合理。~使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别小错，但完全不影响理解。一有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构清慵，意义连贯。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档(7-8分)一覆盖了所有内容要点，表述比较清楚、合理。一使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有些许错误，但不影响理解。~比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清惭，意义比较连贯。达到了预期的写作目的。